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  1. CONTEXT: Cloudio, becoming the bon vivant, tries his southern accent on Sandria, but is also maudlin, sentimental and she tells him at the end to get a grip (the last words will be rerecorded in a woman’s voice).

    Note: I have used parts of Lady Gaga’s Bad Romance video and a couple Modigliani images, of the movie with Andy Garcia, and of Modigliani’s long necked woman Helene Aubert. I have used these only in this video as fair dealing for well known items/stories as this is art with no intention of making money. This is the same as any other recognizable ‘context of the world’ material in this project.

  2. obviously like your web-site but you have to check the spelling on quite a few of your posts. Several of them are rife with spelling problems and I to find it very troublesome to tell the reality on the other hand I’ll certainly come again again.

    • It is intentional that Cloudio makes spelling and grammar mistakes. It is Sandria’a sense of humour that a computer, which should make no such mistakes, actually does because of her programming.

      As for the Sandria text, I prefer leaving punctuation out in my poetry. This makes phrasing and visual structure much more important to the readers so they don’t stumble. My previous book, What It Means To Be Human, had six styles of punctuation and five styles of stanzas. This is something that as a poet you take control of.

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